Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more exercise and spent more time with family and friends, whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems. What are the causes of this and what are some solutions?
From the experts point of view, in the past people were happier and healthier as they did more exercise as well as allocated more time with family and friends;
however
today, many suffer aloneness and health problems. The main reasons can be that popularity of overworking and Internet access.
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To begin
, these days people allocate much more moment for their industry and earnings than sports activities and family or friends. A stuff, Linking Words
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, in average, should spend 8 to 10 hours for the job per day while the trial starts at 8am, but nowadays, in order to earn more, he may work about 12 to 15 hours in a day. Linking Words
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, he cannot be with their friends or free to relax. Provided that, they stop working overtime and Linking Words
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, in the 21st century the Internet became really popular among people. Linking Words
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, rather than meeting with friends face-to-face, they chat or see each other through Linking Words
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, young people prefer to study online or play games at a distance with their friends, Linking Words
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people might suffer with overweight, depression, loneliness and become unsociable. Providing that, the producers of these apps should make the fee of using them much more expensive. Linking Words
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Thus people
can allocate time for family members or to do fun sport activities, like basketball.
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