Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give opinion.

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The Socialization is process of everyone's day to day routine,

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may interact with different peoples.Some people deem that Hi-Tech may make peoples increasingly sociable, While others believe that peoples become less sociable.

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Your opinion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

301 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

online marketplaces
mobile payment options
personalized advertising
accessibility
compare prices
decision fatigue
impulse buying
financial imprudence
privacy and data security
transformed
streamlined
user-friendly

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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Your opinion

Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?

Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university eduation benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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