School Teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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Students are considered to be future of every nation. To develop each student to responsible citizen,
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and
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teacher
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has a great role as well as responsibilities.Today we are going to discuss the role of
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teacher
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's responsibility in the development of social and intellectual in every
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student's
life other than parents. From my point of view
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refers to the speaker or writer
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would agree with
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statement that, teachers can make a big influences in
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student
students'
student's
life to develop social and intellectual skills.
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, most of the students spend their daily time in their
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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
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it will more than 10 hours in a day. During
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time students
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are developing
are develop
are developed
their skills and to develop good skills,
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and
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teacher
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have a great role. A
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teacher
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can craft good behaviour skills in their pupils by teaching good lessons and giving advices.
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,
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teacher
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can teach their
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student
government policies, traffic rules and many more rules and regulation which instructed by the home government. By incorporating lessons and
practicess
a customary way of operation or behavior
practices
practice
,
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can illustrate students their
importants
commodities (goods or services) bought from a foreign country
imports
importance
impotence
.Visiting
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the force of policemen and officers
police
stations and hospitals with students,
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teacher
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the teacher
can explain how the system of
govenment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
is working. To
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sum up
, A
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can influence a student's life. For better future of a country, young generation with trained social and intellectual are essential. So once
again i
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again, I
again I
agree with the
devlopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
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of social and intellectual studies should start from
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with the help of
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teacher
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a teacher
the teacher
teachers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • nuances
  • responsibility
  • intellectual development
  • social development
  • structured learning environment
  • curriculum
  • diverse interactions
  • group activities
  • conflict resolution
  • foundational impact
  • core values
  • beliefs
  • attitudes
  • nurturing
  • joint responsibility
  • collaboration
  • continuous dialogue
  • distinct roles
  • underestimate
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