Tell us about one or two times where you have utilised your problem solving skills to achieve an outcome.

I am able to solve problems of managing an overwhelming workload by assigning jobs to other
teachers
so they are responsible for their own fields. Indeed, each group of
teachers
is encouraged to take
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in organizing meetings, gathering documents and making
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to achieve a mutual goal. To illustrate
this
, a teacher’s group who is in charge of holding concerts in the gym for a cultural festival was successful in creating the time schedules of band and class performances by themselves. They
also
got full responsibility for managing special equipment for light and sound on the stage without my assistance.
This
allows me to coordinate other important tasks
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hygiene guidance to students who cook and sell food and establishing additional plans for emergent situations.
Therefore
, I have learned that
such
collaboration of teamwork is crucial for the accomplishment of complicated and demanding tasks as we are able to make
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steady progress in an extensive range of jobs simultaneously. Another significant skill for problem
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is
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fair evaluation, which allows me to see both positive and negative consequences that will be helpful in making a better decision for the future. Indeed, I encouraged students and
teachers
to answer a questionnaire so I could find some potential problems that might be solved to increase their satisfaction next time.
For example
, when some
teachers
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that preparation time including rehearsals and decorations of stores was not sufficient, I extended the periods so students were able to make
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better
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and were able to improve the quality of their performances.
This
turned out quite successful as
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seemed to be highly satisfied with their performances
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were more dynamic and unique than ever. Since
then
, I have believed that feedback plays an essential role in discovering some potential issues
as well as
establishing more precise and advanced plans.
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The essay provides specific examples of problem-solving in the context of managing workload and evaluating feedback, which effectively supports the main points.
task achievement
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