Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Traffic
congestion and air pollution are some of the two thorny issues that every nation has to confront and try to figure it out. To tackle these, people have a proposal that authorities should invest more budgets in upgrading
railway
systems. I completely agree with
this
since I believe that vehicles on the road are the main reason causing these issues.
To begin
with, in recent years, the increase in demand for a modern
railway
system is burgeoning since dwellers, especially who’re living in the metropolis, are becoming tired of staying in their car and waiting for a long hour
traffic
jam. China,
for example
, where have the heavy
traffic
congestion in the world, has been quite successful in reducing the volume of vehicles on the road. Noticing the problem, The Chinese government has been prioritized to enhance their
railway
systems,
such
as increasing the speed level, expanding the interiors to make it faster and more comfortable, it’s gradually changing citizens’ habits from commonly using private cars to use railways for commuting. From that, the
traffic
condition in
this
country is less heavy than others.
Therefore
, upgrading
railway
systems is an optimal solution to mitigate
traffic
congestion. As important as the argument above, It is obvious to see that emissions gas from private vehicles are one of the main elements contaminating our atmosphere. So, I still have a belief that a modern
railway
system helps
not only reduce
Suggestion
doesn't only reduce
don't only reduce
road
traffic
but
also
tackle the air pollution problem. Singapore, a good role model in managing environmental problems, by concentrating on enhancing public transportations, most notably are railways, have triumphed in reducing the volume of CO2 emissions in the air to the lowest level (below 8 metric tones even it is an industrial nation).
Hence
, improving
railway
systems is able to solve the short-term as well as the long term problems. In conclusion, it is evident that the enhancing
railway
system is the future solution to ensure human’s living and protect environment. As
this
argument, I believe that human’s habits could change if governments give them a better alternative method.
Submitted by Hoàng Khương Nguyễn on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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