Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email 1. recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn. 2. explain how your friend could learn this sport. 3. suggest that you both learn this sport together. Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear.....
Dear Thomas,
I hope
this
email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing this
email to give you some advice about a new sport that you are interested in learning.
To begin
with, there is a famous cricket
academy including experienced cricket
instructors in our locality. As far as I am concerned, you have a great fascination with learning cricket
skills , especially for batting. I firmly believe that you will greatly benefit if you enrol in this
academy as they have been providing state-of-the-art training facilities such
as a spacious indoor gymnasium and flexible training hours.
Furthermore
, I would like to give you company during the training session as I am also
interested in enriching my batting skills. Besides
, I will be participating in the local cricket
tournament next week which is why your accompaniment will be more helpful for me to do something good in the upcoming tournament.
I hope the above-mentioned suggestions will be useful for your learning of new sports.
I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding this
matter.
Yours lovingly,
Robert.Submitted by faisalmahamood on
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Task Response
For improved task response, ensure each paragraph addresses a distinct aspect of the task. While your letter does a good job of addressing all three points, elaborating more on each point could enhance clarity and depth. For example, you could include specific reasons why cricket is suitable for your friend beyond your shared interest.
Coherence and Cohesion
To enhance coherence and cohesion, consider using a wider range of linking words or phrases to smoothly connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. Additionally, varying sentence structures can make the text more engaging and fluid.
Writing Tone
Maintaining a suitable tone is crucial. Your closing is fairly informal ('Yours lovingly'), which might not align with all types of recipient. Adjusting the level of formality to match the recipient more appropriately can improve the effectiveness of your communication.
