A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses

Dear Harshit, I hope you and your family are all well. If you remember that I was planning to take a trip to Las Vegas for which I was keeping my hard earnings saved. The moment has now come and I have booked my tickets and it’s a 6 days holiday starting on
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commencing 5th July. I request you to take care of my dog Jack and take
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your home. As you know that Jack is very friendly with you and you are very fond of dogs so I believe he
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give you hard time. I have already prepared
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for a week, you just need to put it on the serving table for him twice
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a day and he
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to go for a long walk at sunrise and sunset. Would you
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kindly look
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my home once
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a day until I come back. I will leave the keys under the doormat and
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keep an eye on the
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as
some times
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sometimes
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there can be an urgent mail which needs to be responded
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. Thank you for
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consideration, I will wait for your response. Warm wishes, Varun Chawla
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • however
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