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Traveling contributes to a language education more than studying in a language school.

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Nowadays there is an opinion that it is better to learn languages in native speaking countries rather than in your hometown, using different textbooks and going to
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 schools. I would like to give my point of view on
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 issue.
To begin
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 with, I think that travelling abroad, visiting other countries provides lots of benefits for learning a
second
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language
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.
Firstly
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, going to a native speaking
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, you gain experience in native culture, so that you are able to understand the
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 more.
Secondly
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, meeting native habitants of these places is
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 helpful for learning new expressions and that
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 which people really use. The
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 consists of many slang expressions that are better to learn in the natural environment.
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, while being in a foreign
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 you are constantly exposed to real-life conversations. You start using the
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 in a meaningful way rather than imagining fictional situations and dialogues, as it is commonly practiced in
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 schools.
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, when visiting a native speaking
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, you can get rid of the
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 barrier. Many learners are afraid of using the foreign
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, making grammar mistakes, but after talking to a foreigner they understand it is not something you should worry about. Native speakers help you, understanding that you are just a learner.
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 talking develops your fluency. Taking everything into account, I want to say that achieving great results in learning the
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 is better when being surrounded by native speakers rather than just studying in your
country
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.
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