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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This both affects what people think is important and is a negative impact on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Advertistment
Suggestion
Advertisement
 invades almost every facet of our life. Many people believe that it is slowly corrupting our moral values and negatively affect everyone's lives.
However
, I disagree with
such
 sentiment and believe that advertising overall brings more goods than harm.
To begin
 with, advertising is an important condition for a healthy
consumer
 market. It
serve
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serves
 as a way for customer to discover new
product
 and differentiate products from each branch. In other word, it
empower
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empowers
consumer
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consumers
the consumer
 with more knowledge of the
product
 they brought so that they can make an educated choice.
On
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In
To
By
constrast
the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared
contrast
, in a market without advertising,
consumer
 tends to stick to one brand, probably the brand that the store manager decided to put on top of the shelf. In consequence,
this
 will create a monopoly situation in which the largest brand
just pay
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just pays
 the store for a better shelf position
instead
 of innovating their
product
. In
this
 sense, advertising is beneficial to every
consumer
 because it
encourage
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encourages
 brands to
imporve
to make better
improve
 their
product
.
Although
 it is partly true that
advertisting
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
 shift our value towards consumerism, I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 the effect is over exaggerated and can be
remedy
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remedied
 through various means
such
 as regulation and education. It is undeniable that
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
 create a sense of
urge
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urgency
 to buy things
that is
unecessary
not necessary
unnecessary
necessary
.
However
, nowadays, thanks to education and parenting, most people have become aware of these negative psychological effects.
As a result
, we are, to an extent, building up
a
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an
 immunity
toward
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to
 it.
In addition
,
government agency
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a government agency
have been
Suggestion
has been
had been
 conscientious on establishing regulation to ban many
predetory
characterized by plundering or pillaging or marauding
predatory
advertistments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
. All in all, the negative impacts of
advertistment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
 are largely dissolved. In conclusion,
advertistment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
perform
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performs
 an important duty in our
consumer
 society.
Althought
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Although
 it comes with some drawbacks, overall the benefit overbalance the potential harm.
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