Today people are surrounded by advertising. This both affects what people think is important and is a negative impact on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertistment

Suggestion

invades almost every facet of our life. Many people believe that it is slowly corrupting our moral values and negatively affect everyone's lives.

However

, I disagree with

such

sentiment and believe that advertising overall brings more goods than harm.

To begin

with, advertising is an important condition for a healthy

consumer

market. It

serve

Suggestion

serves

as a way for customer to discover new

product

and differentiate products from each branch. In other word, it

empower

Suggestion

empowers

consumer

Suggestion

consumers

the consumer

with more knowledge of the

product

they brought so that they can make an educated choice.

Suggestion

constrast

the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared

contrast

, in a market without advertising,

consumer

tends to stick to one brand, probably the brand that the store manager decided to put on top of the shelf. In consequence,

this

will create a monopoly situation in which the largest brand

just pay

Suggestion

just pays

the store for a better shelf position

instead

of innovating their

product

. In

this

sense, advertising is beneficial to every

consumer

because it

encourage

Suggestion

encourages

brands to

imporve

to make better

improve

their

product

Although

it is partly true that

advertisting

a public promotion of some product or service

advertising

shift our value towards consumerism, I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

the effect is over exaggerated and can be

remedy

Suggestion

remedied

through various means

such

as regulation and education. It is undeniable that

advertisments

a public promotion of some product or service

Fully explain your ideas

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

293 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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