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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree ?

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The issue of whether or not public libraries should be maintained since the computer technology is able to replace their tasks has become a source of controversy. In
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 with, thanks to the development of the digital technology, an immense amount of data can be stored online, which allows many researchers to easily get the access to the huge amount of
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 without having to travel to local libraries.
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, the overwhelming majority of people are able to look for much
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 on the internet whenever they want, while most of the local libraries are only be opened during several hours on a daily basis;
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, it is completely beneficial to those having a hectic schedule since they cannot visit these places during the operating hours. What is more, it is obvious that far lower costs are required to maintain and develop e-libraries; henceforth, the state can donate a lower amount of money to these libraries, and they easily take care of other important fields,
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 as environment, infrastructure, health and the economy.
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, Lots of benefits of public libraries nowadays that should be taken into consideration. The most important advantage of local libraries is that it is undeniable that the library is one of the most popular means of getting the access to
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 among people ages, because almost all elderly people these days are technophobe;
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 many physical libraries are always preferred choice. An additional benefit of the library is a reliable source of
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 carefully categorized by lots of library staff members. All things considered, it can be concluded that even though the advance of technology today can help to access
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, the government ought to maintain and improve these libraries, which aims to offer
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 from many people from different ages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repositories of books
  • promoting literacy
  • community engagement
  • equal access to information
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
  • personalized assistance
  • educational programs
  • cultural events
  • safe spaces
  • community meetings
  • tactile experience
  • preserving historical documents
  • important cultural repositories
  • fostering a sense of community
  • communal hubs
  • serene and focused environment
  • conducive to study and reflection
  • irreplaceable value
  • distracted environment
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