Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

We can clearly see that there has been remarkably increasing in the number of devices which use to be monitored what people are doing or chatting.
This
can be criticized that individuals’ privacy could be violated using badly.
However
, from my point of view, usage of cameras or mobile phones can be helpful for the police or government. On the one hand, a great number of people would agree that some numerous innovations
such
as cellular phones, applications downloaded by people to find their direction are inevitable for us.
In addition
to
this
, security cameras, application of Ground Position System, which can be used by many people who have possession of a smartphone make secure our life as preventing some crimes before doing or checking our children’s place after school.
For instance
, when a guilty person broke into our phone store, we let our local police know and the culprit was arrested immediately by the police thanks to cameras in the wake of the burglary. On the one hand, great numbers of people opine that
as a result
of these advancements, people suffer from deprivation of privacy.
That is
to say, individuals can be mentioned by the governments or be sold for the sake of money. Yet, none of whom can put forward noticeable evidence to prove their thesis publicly.
For example
, millions of people exactly no exemption me are using smartphones and
although
Suggestion
despite
this
, I did not come across any friends of me who suffered from invading their special life. To sum up, in light of
this
information above, we can be clearly said that developments in technology was not able to underestimated by people.
Although
many people said that tracking us a bad attitude, but
this
is needed to decrease the rate of crime all around the country or the world.
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