Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is a good thing, while other thinks that it has dis advantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
modern era, World is changing a lot.
there
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There
are so many
competation
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competitions
in the businesses as compared to the past. People have different views, how companies are promoting themselves. In my opinion, sponsoring sports for
advertisiting
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
is really good way for promotion. In the following
peregraphs
one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line
paragraphs
paragraph
, I have some strong argument to support my view.
However
, some people believe that companies are doing right for promotion, while they are sponsoring
sport
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sporting
events. Because, sport is only one of the thing, which is watching
by
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from
the group of people. While they
are watching
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were watching
at that time they
also
see the
advertisiment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
advertisements
of other products and
also
discuss about it with others.
Some times
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Sometimes
, they
also
infrom
impart knowledge of some fact, state or affairs, or event to
inform
in from
their friends and
reletatives
estimated by comparison; not absolute or complete
relatives
about the
advertisiment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
advertisements
. Due to
this
reason, it works as a
refferal
a person whose case has been referred to a specialist or professional group
referral
program. One government research shows that, 78 percentage companies who did their
advertisiment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
advertisements
threw sports are in huge profit.
Moreover
, On
other hand
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the other hand
still some people have
mentallity
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the mentality
mentality
that, investing in sports for
advertisiment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
advertisements
is west of money.
On
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At
some point its not completely wrong. Because it required lots of
investiment
the act of investing; laying out money or capital in an enterprise with the expectation of profit
investment
investments
.
For example
, 2005 report shows that 90 percent cost of the sport is covered by
this
type of sponsorship. But every coin has two side " one is positive while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
is
negetative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
". When companies are sponsoring for promotion, it
doesn't meaning
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doesn't mean
does not mean
is not meant
has not meant
isn't meant
hasn't meant
thay
people in general
they
that
are investing in
right place
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the right place
. Sometimes if
add
give help or assistance; be of service
aid
is not
effective
Accept comma addition
effective, then
then
people
are ignored
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have ignored
are ignoring
ignore
it and
company
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the company
lost the money. To conclude, I
thing
an instance of deliberate thinking
think
that investing in sports for
advertisiment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
advertisements
is more beneficial
rethar
on the contrary
rather
than others. It is good for the business as well as good for the investor.
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