Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that it is a good thing, while other thinks that it has dis advantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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competation
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is really good way for promotion. In the following a public promotion of some product or service
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, I have some strong argument to support my view.
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investments
For example
, 2005 report shows that 90 percent cost of the sport is covered by this
type of sponsorship. But every coin has two side " one is positive while other
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another
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". When companies are sponsoring for promotion, it characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
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than others. It is good for the business as well as good for the investor.on the contrary
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