It's been seen that reading for pleasure develops imaginations and better language skills than to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that reading is better than watching
television
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since it improves people's creativity and imagination, and their literature skill as well. To a certain extent, I would agree with the statement, but I do believe that watching
television
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at the proportionate time could
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bring positive values to our mind and language as well. On the one hand, it is true that reading brings a lot of benefits for mankind. Despite that people read books or articles for pleasure or study, it is a fact that reading will enhance people's literacy and develop their imaginative thinking. As there is no visual display in reading, it means that people have to imagine by themselves about the event
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informed in the article or book, and definitely, it will improve people's creativity.
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that, by doing a lot of reading, people will get used to seeing proper grammar, formal languages and new
collocations
several things grouped together or considered as a whole
collections
,
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it will gradually improve the reader's language capabilities.
On the other hand
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, watching
television
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at the right portion and only watching appropriate programs
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bring benefits
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people. Some
television
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programs trigger their viewer's imaginative thinking,
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as National Geographic or Discovery Channel. And
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there are other programs
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as BBC News or
CNN which
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CNN, which
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affect people's way of communication.
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, watching
television
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could
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bring positive effects to their watchers. In conclusion, it is said that the reading has more positive effects on human creative thinking and language skills. To a certain point, I would agree with it, but I personally think that watching
television
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has some positive things as well. It could improve our imaginative thinking, communication skills and enhance our knowledge, but we must select the appropriate programs and watch them proportionately.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • develops
  • imaginations
  • better language skills
  • watch
  • TV
  • agree
  • disagree
  • enhances
  • promotes
  • passive
  • engaging
  • stimulate
  • creativity
  • balanced
  • approach
  • beneficial
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