Some people think that government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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We can see many protests nowadays backing poor and uneducated, jobless persons. I agree that government plays a huge role to control

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scenario.

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there it greater impact on a country's economy due to

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, lets discuss about the current scenario in economy with free demand and supply. Economical imbalance has been always there in a free economy, where the people are allowed to make as much profit as possible. Due to

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kind of scenario, the rich have become richer and poor have more poorer.

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, Local bodies create certain areas or zones as a tax free haven for investors make more money.

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, benefits of schemes not reaching to end users.

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government comes up with many relief packages for needy people, but most of the times it fails to reach towards the end user.

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, people have to face long waiting list to get any local grant.

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creates distress among young and unemployed people, which results in a mass protest.

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, lets talk about solution in order to reduce poverty in an effective manner. Tax collection can be an effective tool to control difference between rich and poor.

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, more tax gets collected from wealthy people and benefits are provided to a large population of poor humans in need.

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local bodies need to provide help young to start a business.

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as, finance and loan grant to small and medium businesses. To conclude, There has been always growing concerns over high jobless and homeless people, but with careful planning and execution countries can come out of

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difficult situation.

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Some people think that government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to manager of the hotel. -Expain the problem -say why the documents are important -suggest a solution

smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or diagree?