Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most significant issues that many people of today's society are very concerned about is the development of travel field. Tourism is on the increase, which brings to the nation' economy, some plus, while it has minus
to
being one more than one
two
other aspects.
This
debatable matter will be discussed in
this
essay and my stand will be clarified at the end. On the one hand, every year, the number of tourists travelling to Vietnam is more and more increasing.
For example
, the number of visitors
last
year, almost doubled
to
Suggestion
for
in
those two years ago, which makes the authorities take care of tourism and put efforts in changing it better because the more visitors, the more revenue.
Besides
, a sum of tourism service, including accommodations, food or outdoor activities and the like gain more income and the employees' salaries are higher than before, since even if the citizens' lives are stable and firm, the economic system will maintain and develop.
Additionally
, the great images of Vietnam
such
an the hospitable indigenous Vietnamese, traditional culture, picturesque scenes and so on can be widespread over the world, so the others will admire and give our respect in order that our country has chances to shake hands with them.
On the other hand
,
this
prevailing phenomenon brings some drawbacks for our living environment. Undoubtedly, a number of visitors are aware of protecting the sea habitat or the forest.Some dump rubbish on the sand and even in the sea while others damage living sea creatures or coral.
Moreover
, there in usually fire in the forest caused by the tourists who are not educated about basic knowledge of camping and soft skills.
Last
but not least, the people's life is bothered sometimes, especially ethnic minority in remote areas. In conclusion, the development of tourism industry makes both plus and minus. I strongly believe that its benefits far outweigh the drawbacks.
Submitted by Tubbythao on

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