Many people join distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does.

Today, our people are facing a big pandemic.Everyone is in quarantine and students are studying at home.
Distance
learning is something which is helping students to get educated from home. Some people think that
distance
learning can help you to learn more things.And everyone has an access to books and other things online.Students can do their work online and get a feedback within 5 to 10 minutes.It is an efficient way of learning.Studying from home can
also
help you to be with your family and spend
time
with them.For some people it is hard to control their family life and
school
/college life, for those people I would recommend to make a
time
table
.
Accept space
.
It will help you to manage your
time
.
On the other hand
, some people think that
distance
learning is useless and won’t help you at all.It is just a waste of
time
and effort.Students get less motivated.
Also
, some people don’t have access to the internet or they can’t pay for the internet.These people can’t do online lessons and they get upset because they are not getting educated. In conclusion, personally I think that I got less motivated when it came to
distance
learning.I didn’t see a point of doing online lessons
.
Accept space
.
Because every
time
I try to do my
school
work, I get distracted by my family members.For me, it is better to go to
school
and get knowledge rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
distance
learning.
Distance
learning is not for me.I hope soon all the students will go to
school
and quarantine will be over
.
Accept space
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • independence
  • communication
  • interaction
  • academic resources
  • extracurricular activities
  • hands-on experience
  • peer support
  • time management
  • procrastination
  • motivation
  • feedback
  • structured learning environment
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