Central and local government make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue. Some people think this money should be invested in social programs for the poor.
Nowadays, governments make a great deal of money via promoting festivals.
However
, the issue of how and where governments should spend this
revenue is still widely debated, with some people claiming that is
should be invested in embarking on welfare services for poor members of society
. Personally, I entirely accept this
, and will explain why in this
essay.
Firstly
, we have to consider that poverty
is a universal problem that affects every nation on earth_ both rich and poor. For example
, in African countries, we see a flood of emigrants leaving their poor nations to find better highly paid jobs with high-quality working conditions as well as better quality of life in wealthy countries. This
phenomenon causes a very real threat to both destination countries and countries of origin in terms of crime and losing human capital, respectively. Furthermore
, low-income households and high-income families living within a country are influenced negatively by increased poverty
rates as well. In this
case, the impoverished may engage in criminal acts such
as kidnappings and burglaries to survive. Therefore
, poverty
leads to serious consequences for not only deprived but also
wealthy.
A further
reason to support this
idea is the development aspect. For a society
to make progress, not only does it need investors, but also
it needs productive and responsible workers. Most of the impoverished are potentially valuable members who seek the opportunity to lift themselves and their families out of poverty
. By providing them with welfare-type programs such
as social protection systems, vulnerable families can become productive members of society
. In fact, if such
safety net programs are well-designed and implemented, they can powerfully enhance human capital and productivity, reduce inequalities and end the inter-generational cycle of poverty
. As a result
, such
government welfare programs give impoverished individuals a chance to climb out of poverty
and boost shared prosperity among society
citizens.
To conclude, I feel that investing the revenue in welfare programs such
as cash assistance programs and social safety net programs for people living below the poverty
level should be a governments' main priority. If these social programs are implemented wisely, it would alleviate poverty
and reduce inequality in society
, which in turn brings about permanent happiness to the whole members of society
, unlike festivals which make people experience temporary joy.Submitted by Malika azimova on
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