Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

In modern
society and
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society, and
due to high
socio economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
disparities there should be an effort made to make a situation fair
.
Accept space
.
Implementing school
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Implementing a school
uniform is one of the
approach
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approaches
to attain the same.
Since
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For
a decade or so, the uniform has been mandatory for children at schools,
this
leads to a dispute in society. Educational professionals believe that unvarying dress is imperative for any pupils to focus on study rather than socioeconomic disparities while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and academic achievement.
This
essay will discuss both approaches mentioned above in details To embark upon, children from various financial backgrounds can get admissions into any school. Despite their economical standards students should be treated equally in any social platform
such
as schools, colleges,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
… and uniforms play a crucial role in creating equality between them.
Moreover
, with orderly clothing students can learn how to be disciplined at a very young age. On top of
this
,
this
would help in creating
harmony environment
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a harmonious environment
harmonious environment
in schools
However
, some experts argue that Uniforms take away the ability to use clothing as
means
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a means
of expressing support for social causes
On the other hand
, students’ right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
and academic achievement, and emphasize the socioeconomic disparities they intended to disguise. To conclude, the right to express might help in cognitive development in children.
However
, following the protocols
such
as compulsory uniforms make students safe and socially equal in public schools and it
also
benefits them both personally and professionally.
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