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Countries around the world will be facing significant challanges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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There has been a worrying trend that countries around the globe will be facing challenges not only regarding environment but
also
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 education and
population
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.
This
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 issue can be ascribed to a number of reasons and it must be addressed by definite actions. The
first
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 and foremost issue that my country will face
be
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is being
 of
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population
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the population
populations
a population
.
This
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 is because of lack of awareness among couples regarding birth control measures.
For instance
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, recently the
population
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 survey worldwide stated that India in
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next five years
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the next five years
 will surpass the world's most populated country
that is
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 China.
Second
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 problem would be of
pollution
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. With the increase in
population
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, the
pollution
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 will substantially rise.
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 is because of many factors like increase in demand
of
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for
 products will require construction of more industries
,
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,
hence
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 it will contribute in increasing all forms of
pollution
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 like noise, air, land and even water
pollution
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.
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, my country being a developing one, it will face problem in providing good quality education uniformly. So, due to inadequate system of imparting knowledge and information will eventually stem more issues like
iliteracy
ignorance resulting from not reading
illiteracy
literacy
, poverty and inflation in the long run. A number of strong measures must be implemented to tackle
this
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 sensitive issue. The
first
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 solution is that the government should organize campaigns and educate people about measures to control birth.
Secondly
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, free education should be provided so as to reduce illiteracy. To conclude, there are
number
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a number
 of solutions that the governments across the world must take before the problems discussed above rises to an uncontrollable level.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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