It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?

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As we know capitalism is dominant lots of world countries nowadays. According to capitalism, the one who works hard will gain a lot.
Therefore many
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Therefore, many
people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their job and did not bother with the idea of “
work
-life balance. I disagree with these people and think that people should balance
work
-life. In my opinion, each person has one life and its average is 80 years. If he doesn'
t
want to waste his years, they have two main options.
First
and foremost, the person has to find his favourite job in which he works with love and doesn'
t
know how
time
past.
Thus
, when people looking for a career they should not make an impulsive decision, and try to find
a
Suggestion
an
office which he loves no matter how many hours he will
endeavor
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
. In
this
case, if he doesn'
t
have any
time
for other social activities and entertainment, his performance will suffice for his happiness.
Secondly
, If people don'
t
find an accurate
work
for them and just struggle for money, they should make a special activity for themselves after
work
. In
this
case,
although
they are bored during
work
time
, the activity which they will do after the
work
, make hours of
work
to endure.
Furthermore
, if their
work
is unendurable, they should create a bond among some of their colleagues, and make their job a bit more bearable.
For instance
, I do not
work
what I want, but I have entertaining and intelligent co-workers so I spent my
work
time
better. In conclusion, people should not waste their
work
time
and try to find things which entertain and make more meaningful their
time
everlastingly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Well-being
  • Productivity
  • Fulfilling
  • Time management
  • Prioritize
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