It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?
As we know capitalism is dominant lots of world countries nowadays. According to capitalism, the one who works hard will gain a lot.
Therefore many
people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their job and did not bother with the idea of “Accept comma addition
Therefore, many
work
-life balance. I disagree with these people and think that people should balance work
-life.
In my opinion, each person has one life and its average is 80 years. If he doesn't
want to waste his years, they have two main options. First
and foremost, the person has to find his favourite job in which he works with love and doesn't
know how time
past. Thus
, when people looking for a career they should not make an impulsive decision, and try to find a
office which he loves no matter how many hours he will Suggestion
an
endeavor
. In a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
endeavour
this
case, if he doesn't
have any time
for other social activities and entertainment, his performance will suffice for his happiness.
Secondly
, If people don't
find an accurate work
for them and just struggle for money, they should make a special activity for themselves after work
. In this
case, although
they are bored during work
time
, the activity which they will do after the work
, make hours of work
to endure. Furthermore
, if their work
is unendurable, they should create a bond among some of their colleagues, and make their job a bit more bearable. For instance
, I do not work
what I want, but I have entertaining and intelligent co-workers so I spent my work
time
better.
In conclusion, people should not waste their work
time
and try to find things which entertain and make more meaningful their time
everlastingly.Submitted by eliyevarahime6 on
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