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Band 6

You would like to join the local orchestra Write a letter of application to the orchestra. In the letter: - Introduce yourself and your instrument of choice - Explain how your credentials make you a good candidate - Express your enthusiasm for music Write 150 words .

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Dear Mr. Smith, I hope you are in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing
this
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 letter to apply for the guitarist position in your
music
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 band. I am Faisal, and I play the
guitar
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 in many fancy restaurants. I have recently found out about your band and came to know that you are looking for a professional guitarist for your band. I have completed a
music
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 course at Royal
Music
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 College in Bangladesh.
Apart from
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this
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, I have four years experience of playing the
guitar
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. Let me tell you about my
some
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apply
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achievements
of
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in playing the
guitar
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 in 2021. I participated in the annual
music
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 festival held in Bangladesh
this
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 year, and I won the first prize in
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guitar
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the guitar
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 category.
Moreover
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, I have played even background
music
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 for the song "Believer". Right from my childhood, I have had only one interest
is to
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 playing the
guitar
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 and proving myself. I am so much into
music
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. In fact, I know all the chords on the
guitar
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 and can play everything as expected. I hope you will come to me if you hear me playing. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Faisal
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your letter has a clear introductory paragraph, with distinct paragraphs for each point required in the prompt.
task achievement
Maintain a formal tone consistently throughout the letter, avoiding overly casual phrases or slang.
task achievement
Provide specific examples related to each point mentioned in the task to strengthen your application and make it more persuasive.
coherence cohesion
Close the letter formally, summarizing your application and expressing eagerness for a response.
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