You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir/

Madams

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, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my

roommate

in the Rezvan accommodation. I am a student at IMT University and I am living in

room

number 2,

second

floor the Rezvan accommodation. The

room

is shared between me and some other

student

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students

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. Unfortunately, she is not a good

roommate

and I have some

problem

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problems

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with her. I am a very clean girl. These days I need

pace

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a pace

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and

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quiet

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quit

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quiet

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environment to study.

However

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with my

roommate

condition

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I cannot study. She is too messy, make a lot of noise. And

also

, most of the time she brings her friend to our

room

and

wake

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up until

the

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midnight. During the time they are laughing, dancing. You can imagine how unhappy I was when I discover she uses my private

stuffs

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stuff

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. I cannot stay in

this

room

with my

roommate

any more

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anymore

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. I cannot study, I do not have any privacy. I hope you can settle down

this

matter by changing my

room

. I understand how is difficult to find a new

room

at

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in

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middle

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the middle

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of

semester

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the semester

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. I need a private

room

,

size

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the size

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of

room

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the room

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it

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does not matter, I just need a bed and a table. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mari.