Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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era of industrialization and globalization, maintaining environment
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,
population
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and
education
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is the perplexing question of debate for the government across the world and to deal with all 3 simultaneously is difficult task.
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However it
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However, it
is not impossible. Today, rising environmental
pollution
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is the vital, which are going to be worst in coming time.
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has lead the world to the global warming
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resulting in the melting of polar
ice which
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ice, which
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increase the sea level on the earth.
ultimately it
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Ultimately, it
Ultimately it
would be dangerous for not only for the
humankind but
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humankind, but
for all living entities on the earth. Today, India's
population
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is over 135
crores
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which made county more dense and providing all basic
necessity
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necessities
to each
citizen
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would be
difficult task
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a difficult task
to achieve.
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Education system
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The education system
is the basic pillar for the development of the country. On the top of it, India has one of the highest illiteracy rate among nations which in turn produced irresponsible
citizen
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. Solving all these
problem
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problems
would be
difficult task
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a difficult task
to achieve.
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, government should create strong laws and enforcement to overcome these problems.
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, should impose strong
pollution
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control
polices
a plan of action adopted by an individual or social group
policies
to all industries, as they are the major contributors of the
pollution
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.
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, better sex
education
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should be provided to control the
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population which
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population, which
is lacking in my country.
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better
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a better education system
education
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system and infrastructure should be provided to each of the
citizen
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, so that
coming generation
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coming generations
the coming generation
will be responsible
citizen
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. All in all,
i
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I
assert that if better understanding of the problems like environmental
pollution
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effect,
impact
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the impact
of increasing
population
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and
importance
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the importance
of
education
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, we can surely create the better world for the coming generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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