Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country.
Many people hold the view that in many states of the
world people
are sustained to Accept comma addition
world, people
travel
because this
brings a lot
of advantages for that state and I can say that I found disadvantages too,
even if there are a fewAccept space
,
,
we can deny that do not exist.
Nowadays, because of the Accept space
,
develpment
of the act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
techology
, people the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
find
a Suggestion
are finding
lot
of nice places to visit from around the world.The way to travel
is more facil
and of or concerning the face
facial
feasible
fail
this
encourage
people.Suggestion
encourages
In
the same timeSuggestion
At
,
there are a Accept space
,
lot
of offers at very good prices.Firstly
, tourism
brings a lot
of benefits to humans because is a way to relaxe
become less tense, rest, or take one's ease
relax
,
to escape from Accept space
,
daily routine
and to learn about Suggestion
the daily routine
new culture
from other countries.Another advantage is that people spend money in that country and Suggestion
new cultures
a new culture
this
have
a positive impact Suggestion
has
of
the economy. Suggestion
on
Tourism
can create new jobs in poor countries.For example
, in Fillipine tourism
is principal way
of survival and local Suggestion
the principal way
people
lives with money that Suggestion
peoples'
peoples
are earned
from Suggestion
is earned
tourism
.Gouvernments
should encourage people to Suggestion
Government
travel
with travelling programms
, with money and subventions.a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
Furthermore young people
and children should learn since they are in schools about how to Suggestion
Furthermore, young people
travel
and to learn about new cultures.
On the other hand
, tourism
leads to an overpopulation in places that should pe
preserved.Many countries lose their culture and it is possible that some culture may have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
dissapear
in get lost, as without warning or explanation
disappear
few years
.Suggestion
a few years
This
continuous migration of people can damage to the environment, because the necessity of new hotels is in increasing and due to this
the pollution is high too.Another disadvantage can be the illegal immigrations or illegal foods and services trading.
Taking eveything
into all things
everything
consideration I
Accept comma addition
consideration, I
belive
that advantages overweight the disadvantages and accept as true; take to be true
believe
tourism
should be promovated
and encouraged and I hope that contribute to the progress or growth of
promoted
tourism
will become more and more sustained by every country.Tourism
can help in the progres
of a nation and its citizens.gradual improvement or growth or development
progress
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