Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country.

Many people hold the view that in many states of the
world people
Accept comma addition
world, people
are sustained to
travel
because
this
brings a
lot
of advantages for that state and I can say that I found disadvantages too
,
Accept space
,
even if there are a few
,
Accept space
,
we can deny that do not exist. Nowadays, because of the
develpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
of the
techology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
, people
find
Suggestion
are finding
a
lot
of nice places to visit from around the world.The way to
travel
is more
facil
of or concerning the face
facial
feasible
fail
and
this
encourage
Suggestion
encourages
people.
In
Suggestion
At
the same time
,
Accept space
,
there are a
lot
of offers at very good prices.
Firstly
,
tourism
brings a
lot
of benefits to humans because is a way to
relaxe
become less tense, rest, or take one's ease
relax
,
Accept space
,
to escape from
daily routine
Suggestion
the daily routine
and to learn about
new culture
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new cultures
a new culture
from other countries.Another advantage is that people spend money in that country and
this
have
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has
a positive impact
of
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on
the economy.
Tourism
can create new jobs in poor countries.
For example
, in Fillipine
tourism
is
principal way
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the principal way
of survival and local
people
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peoples'
peoples
lives with money that
are earned
Suggestion
is earned
from
tourism
.
Gouvernments
Suggestion
Government
should encourage people to
travel
with travelling
programms
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
, with money and subventions.
Furthermore young people
Suggestion
Furthermore, young people
and children should learn since they are in schools about how to
travel
and to learn about new cultures.
On the other hand
,
tourism
leads to an overpopulation in places that should
pe
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
preserved.Many countries lose their culture and it is possible that some culture may
dissapear
get lost, as without warning or explanation
disappear
in
few years
Suggestion
a few years
.
This
continuous migration of people can damage to the environment, because the necessity of new hotels is in increasing and due to
this
the pollution is high too.Another disadvantage can be the illegal immigrations or illegal foods and services trading. Taking
eveything
all things
everything
into
consideration I
Accept comma addition
consideration, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that advantages overweight the disadvantages and
tourism
should be
promovated
contribute to the progress or growth of
promoted
and encouraged and I hope that
tourism
will become more and more sustained by every country.
Tourism
can help in the
progres
gradual improvement or growth or development
progress
of a nation and its citizens.
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