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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree ?

#nations #countries #relief #disasters
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health
club
 monthly usage of Miami, Florida with the members included in full-time over the past years is demonstrated in the pie chart in which
also
 clarifies the age status of men and women. Overall, the usage of
health
club
 by both sexes saw a steady rise at the start of the
period
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period, then
then
this
 trend reversed as it came to the end of summer. As seen in from the bar chart, female members’
club
 usage was recorded at exactly 500 people at the start of the
year while
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year, while
this
 figure for male members was slightly higher, which was approximately 560 people. After that,
this
 number stayed unchanged in the
next
 three months, and
finally
, fell continuously to approximately 610 by the end of the year. The amount of male members of
health
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the health club
a health club
health clubs
club
 at the age 21-45 and 65 and above was 55% and 25
% respectively
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%, respectively
, while the amount of female members at the age of 65 and above reached 32% To sum up, the number of people who went to a
health
club
 depended on the seasons of the year with almost users were at
aged
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age
 between 21 and 45.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Humanitarian relief
  • Infrastructure
  • Global solidarity
  • Disproportionately
  • External assistance
  • Rebuilding efforts
  • Disaster response
  • Investment in stability
  • Dependency theory
  • Responsible intervention
  • Paternalistic
  • Shared humanity
  • Sovereignty
  • Capabilities
  • Fatality rates
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