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Some people think it is important to protect all wild animals. Others think that it is only important to protect part of them, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Human civilisation has done great damage to the environment and natural habitat of many animals. While most people would agree that we have the responsibility
tp
in the direction of
to
 preserve endangered animals, Opinions were split on whether
such
 preservation should cover all of the
animal
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animals
. On the one hand, many people believe that
extinction
 is a natural part of evolution and ecology.
In other words
, human should not intervene the
extinction
 process of a
species
 since the intervention itself is
a
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an
 act of disruption to the nature.
On the other hand
, there are people who believe all
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
 should be protected. The biggest reason is that
huamn
characteristic of humanity
human
 civilisation directly or indirectly caused the demise of almost all the extinct
species
 in the recent centuries.
For example
, there was originally a large grey wolf population lived in the Great Britain.
However
, the population
is hunted
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was hunted
 down to
extinction
 in the 15th century in the name of security of the human settlers.
In addition
, light and sound pollution had found to be
a
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an
 indirect reason for the
extinction
 of thousands of
species
.
As a result
, we human, as the culprit of those extinctions, has a responsibility to prevent
further
 disappearance of any
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
. In
conclude
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concluding
, while some believe that
extinction
 is inevitable and we should only sough to protect the one
that is
 important to the ecological system, other opinion that we should be
reponsible
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
 for every endangered animal
species
 since it is most likely to be our fault. Personally, I believe that since we live in a world with limited resources, it would be wise for us to selectively focus on the preservation of
species
 that are most
improtant
of great significance or value
important
.
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