You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

A section of the populace opines that
death sentence
Suggestion
a death sentence
the death sentence
for
crime
Suggestion
a crime
the crime
crimes
is not justifiable and should be discarded from the law. Whereas, few contend that, capital punishment should be integrated in
judicial system
Suggestion
the judicial system
. Advocates of
belief
Suggestion
the belief
that
death penalty
Suggestion
the death penalty
should not be executed, argue that
crime
should be terminated
instead
of criminals. Everyone deserves a
second
chance to overcome their mistakes and has a right to live peacefully. There are several organizations, who not only make an effort to save punishment of criminals, but
also
groom their personality in the
jailhouse
Suggestion
Jailhouse
by various social activities
such
as morning prayers, furniture making and spiritual sessions.
On the contrary
, capital punishment should be made compulsory for heinous crimes to
site
make reference to
cite
an example for everyone to discourage them to even think of attempting
such
monstrosity.
As a result
, the
crime
rate will be reduced or might
possible
Suggestion
possibly
will be vanished in
near future
Suggestion
the near future
.
For instance
, many Middle East countries are enormously stringent in
this
regard and success of
this
strategy can be seen by their less criminal records.
In addition
, justice to the victims and their family can only be given by
death
penalty of rapist and murderers. It is horrifying to imagine that
such
lawbreakers are breathing air because of leniency in laws.
For example
, Delhi rape case accuses were taking advantages of
loop holes
an ambiguity (especially one in the text of a law or contract) that makes it possible to evade a difficulty or obligation
loopholes
in
Indian judiciary system
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the Indian judiciary system
and
victim’s family
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the victim’s family
was calling for their hanging. Despite of
creaky legal system
Suggestion
the creaky legal system
a creaky legal system
,
death sentence
Suggestion
the death sentence
has to enforce for justice. Even though, it took 8 years to execute it. To conclude, according to me, rigorous
death
penalty law should be implemented to affright citizens to commit severe
crime
and to provide justice to the victims.
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