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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
Language barrier
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The language barrier
 makes difficulties for people who are staying in abroad for a long term or making live there. I partly agree with that it may be challenging to live in overseas, but I
also
believealso
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believe also
 believe that it has some upsides. Actually, social problems can relate to communication, namely if a person had not enough
language
 skills, they would not maintain life balance in any country. By
this
 we mean that
o
located at or attached to
on
of
to
 a daily basis, wrong interaction
excarabets
 well-being, as well as
this
 provokes misunderstanding. As an example, migrants face lots of
language
 barriers, in the result, it raises antipathy, discrimination, racism. Regarding the pragmatic concern, job is the main issue for making a living, but
language
 problem obstacles to enrol in a higher salary work, even for
a typical
not representative of a group, class, or type
atypical
 occupation,
such
 as waiter, reception.
Moreover
, problems with local people, joblessness make your life unbearable because of communication inability. It sees that being unable to speak the local
language
 in the other country may cause the negative results, whereas living in abroad acquire several positive outcomes. Being overseas, can be challenging in the terms of private and professional life. By time goes, despite the difficulties you are able to get new experiences, to make perspective relationships, to learn the foreigner’s traditions and as well as a new condition. In conclusion, I firmly conceive that
although
language
 barrier may result in social unrest and practical problems,
such
 as breakdown in understanding and task difficulties
at
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in
 the workplace,
on the other hand
, it is undeniable that it may result to learn local experience and to be aware of overseas’s tradition.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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