Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Music

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is often seen as an essential part of early learning for kids. Some believe that it has an important role to play in well rounded

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of children. Others,

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, are of the

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that it is wasting time and money. In my

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Music

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plays an important role in early childhood

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. I shall be discussing both the viewpoints in

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essay and shall be

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the reasons

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. Those who advocate for

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being taught at schools, are of

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because, they believe that

music

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enhances learning and

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of a child especially in the early learning stages. One particularly good example of

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montisessary

Italian educator who developed a method of teaching mentally handicapped children and advocated a child-centered approach (1870-1952)

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schools, wherein they often use

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to teach children about Alphabets, numbers and colours. Another,

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is that

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provides children a platform to express themselves, which is essential in the

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development

stages. As

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aids speech

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aids, speech

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of the child. Some others believe that schools should focus only on subjects like Maths, science and language. They believe that schooling should be about cultivating minds to be more academic focus rather than focusing on extra

cirricular

of or relating to an academic course of study

curricular

activities. Subjects like Maths, science and geography all provide essential learning for

students which

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students, which

will help them to choose a career in the future. One good example of

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is that schools are ranked in Australia on the basis of how well the students do in Maths, spelling and grammar. In conclusion, In my

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music

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plays an important role in the

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years and

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should definitely be a part of the school

cirriculum

an integrated course of academic studies

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, there should be a fine balance and schools should not

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

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academic focus on subjects like Maths and science either. Both should go hand in hand in creating a

condusive

tending to bring about; being partly responsible for

conducive

learning environment for students.