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Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash do you think this is trend will be useful for the society.

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Among the new technologies
,
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,
cashless transaction has an important role in contributing towards making people's life easier.In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
 is one of the finest
invention
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inventions
 in
this
 era.From using leaves to coins and
then
 to paper printed
cash
 humans have come a long way.And I strongly believe just like all other technologies
,
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,
the
usage
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use
 of plastic
cash
 will be having tremendous pros rather than
cons
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the cons
.
Firstly
,
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,
you don't have to take
bulk amount
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the bulk amount
a bulk amount
 of
cash
 wherever you go.While you are travelling
,
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,
you need
money
 for various expenses and it is tiresome to carry it along with you everywhere.Plastic
money
 eradicates
this
incovenience
an inconvenient discomfort
inconvenience
.
Secondly
,
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,
you don't need to worry about the calculations.People are always anxious about
money
 maths.Since you are not handling
money
 in your hands and since it is safe in
bank
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the bank
a bank
,
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,
you are able to avoid
unneccessary
not necessary
unnecessary
overthinking
.
Finally
,
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,
you don
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t need to think about the safety of your assets.People always have a fear of losing
money
.We can see many examples in our society itself.Many individuals lose their sleep over safeguarding their
cash
.
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Even though
,
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,
while people are doing well in their life economically
,
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,
they might get a
heartattack
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heart attack
 if they lose a penny. To conclude, I firmly state that using debit and credit cards is the most useful way to safeguard your
money
 and undoubtedly it is a boon to our society.
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