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in spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays,
agriculture
 is very much advanced with new technology and seed germination process, but still people are not able to have at least one meal of the
day
 and remain hungry.
However
, while our
agriculture
 department is now supported by latest technology, I believe we should take some action so that no one in the world dies due to hunger. Our
day
 starts with a meal and ends with a meal,
food
 is the most essential part of our life.
Firstly
, the government sector and even private companies like Amazon and Google has specially designed laboratories to do research on
food
 cultivation and seed germination. All are focusing particularly on how to grow
food
 more effectively with high rich in fibre and in quantity.
For example
, a research in 2009, by the University of America declared that, developed countries
such
 as Canada and America spent around 3 billion dollars on
agriculture
 related technology. Because of which they were able to increase their
food
 supply.
Furthermore
, in developing countries raw vegetables are affordable.
On the other hand
, despite of having plenty of the
agriculture
 advances, we notice clips on
day
Suggestion
the day
 to
day
 newspapers that people lost their lives due to hunger. The particular causes we notice are stored and serving, either we are developed or developing countries, our
food
 storage and supply capacity and quality are very poor.
For instance
, local authority takes part on these issues several times still no proper flowchart has been developed. The government in every country has departments which take care of poor and hungry people, and they distribute vegetable, grains and rice to the poor and below poverty line at a subsidized price. Still having people dies in hunger means problem is not solved. In my opinion, a proper storage technique and a proper supply chain are the solution of
this
 problem, being advanced in research on
agriculture
 and being an expert in cultivation is not only key. We have to think about logistic as well, we lose tons and tons of grains every year, because we didn’t stored in well.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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