Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museum

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The museum

A museum

is a place where not only local but tourists spend time on appreciating the art. A majority of

museums charge

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the museums charge

for

admission whereas

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admission, whereas

others do not; it provokes a controversial debate over the merits and demerits of charging

admission

in museums.

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From

my standpoint of view, the benefits of charging

admission

override the disadvantages. To start with, there is an indisputable disadvantage when visitors pay

admission

fee

. It is sometimes difficult to attack

much greater number

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a much greater number

of visitors to museums charging

admission

fee

since visitors have various options to go other than pay museum,

such

as free exhibition, park, or local market.

Moreover

, payment for entrance does not always guarantee pleasing display. Some people would not be willing to take a risk that the exhibition does not satisfy their tastes

although

they pay for

admission

.

However

, the revenue from

admission

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admission fees

the admission fee

fee

contributes to

better security system

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the better security system

. As museums have a wide range of

art crafts

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art, crafts

, including painting and sculpture, it costs a lot to maintain

elaborate environment

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an elaborate environment

in terms of temperature and humidity.

Also

, with

this

revenue, more security guards can be hired in display rooms where famous arts are exhibited. Given the past crimes in prestigious museums and galleries,

for example

, Mona Lisa in Louvre museum, those arts are exposed to danger of burglary at

anytime

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any time

.

Thus

, if museums are able to make extra income

with

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by

charging for

admission

, it would be helpful to make secure circumstance. In conclusion, providing artistic experience is one of

museum’s functions

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a museum’s functions

. When museums have more money from

admission

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the admission fee

admission fees

fee

, they can invest more budget on

securing environment

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the securing environment

for restoring arts and preventing crimes on site and

offer safe place for

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offer a safe place for

visitors to enjoy the art.

Therefore

, I suppose that charging for

admission

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to

museum

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the museum

has more advantages than drawbacks.