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Many people are exercising less. Some people say that by watching major sport events on television such as the Olympics, people can be encouraged to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
this
 modern era, world is changing a lot. People are facing many problems which are related to the health. People have their own different views regarding to how to ready other people
for
Suggestion
to
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
. In my opinion to show the
benefite
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
benefits
 of
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 is the best
way to to encourage
Suggestion
way to encourage
 everyone. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view.
However
, some humans
are believe
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believe
are believed
have believed
are believing
 that, when people are watching sports on
t
the thing named or in question
it
.
v at
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Vat
V at
 that time they can
automatecially
in a reflex manner
automatically
 encouraged by themselves. There are many reasons, why they
are believing
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believe
 in
this
. Because when we see something
exceting
creating or arousing excitement
exciting
existing
 at that time we
also tring
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are also trying
also trying
 to the same thing. When people see the positive effect of the
excecise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
excess
access
,
tyhey
people in general
they
 can easily understand the importance of it. In 2009, one government report shows that, 52
percertange
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentage
 people who are
dowing
engage in
doing
down
sowing
regular workout
Suggestion
regular workouts
a regular workout
, they
starts
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start
 it after watching sports on
screen
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the screen
.
This
 is the main reason why our parents
suggustus
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suggest
suggests
 to watch
theb
definite article
the
the b
 health related programs.
On the other hand
, people have
different mentality
Suggestion
a different mentality
different mentalities
. They think that people can be encouraged by many other ways
for
Suggestion
to
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
. Schools and colleges can deliver the lectures on it. Advertising companies can
also
 print the posters to attract the youth. Government can open free or low pricing gym to attract everyone for their
batter
something superior in quality or condition or effect
better
 health. To conclude, I personally believe that the easiest way to connect the people with
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
 is to show them the good side of it and
also
 show them the
nagative
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
 effect of not doing it.
Overall
Accept comma addition
Overall, this
this
 is
befefical
of or relating to or being biography
biographical
 for the society as well as for the country.
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