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Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages

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According to some peoples opinion, a
car-free
day
 should be there once in a month. The advantages and disadvantages will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
, on environmental point of view, a
car-free
day
 helps in lowering a significant amount of carbon emission into the environment. The consumption of fuel for cars is a bit more when compared to other vehicles.
Hence
 a
car-free
day
 helps in reducing the usage of gasoline, which proportionately deduce the release of carbon related gases like carbon-monoxide, carbon-dioxide etc.
Hence
, a clear difference between a
car-free
day
 and an ordinary
day
 can be observed.
Secondly
, as per the recent censes, there is a rapid
increase
 in time spent by the individual in traffic. Commuting via cars, hikes traffic and the mobility of the vehicle drops. It indirectly makes commuters impatient and results in honking in frustrated manner which may cause
further
 problems.
Hence
 it may
also
 make an impact psychologically. All these problems will be mitigated with
car-free
day
.
On the other hand
, the negative side of
car-free
day
 is it
increase
 load on public transport
increase
 on
car-free
day
. At the peak time, the waiting time for the buses, metro trains might
increase
.
Furthermore
, it becomes a challenge to an employee going to the workplace.
Hence
, a
car-free
day
 might
also
 cause a few problems to the society. To conclude,
car-free
day
 helps in controlling pollution and traffic and on the other way, it increases the load on the public transport and becomes a challenge to the working sector.
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