Some people clain that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make is a legal requirements. To what extent do you think laws are needsd to make people recycle more of their waste?

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today's

Suggestion

Today's

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

wasting lots of household products

that

is not properly recycled

Suggestion

are not properly recycled

. Some think that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make of a legal

requirements

Suggestion

requirement

. And I think laws are partially effective to make people recycle

large number

Suggestion

a large number

of their

waste

. At

first

, people nowadays use lots of plastic bags and containers

that is

not eco-friendly. If

government

fix

alw

a general name for beer made with a top fermenting yeast; in some of the United States an ale is (by law) a brew of more than 4% alcohol by volume

ale

law

of utilizing eco-friendly disposable

product

or other bag (made of cloth or jute) and

cobtainers

any object that can be used to hold things (especially a large metal boxlike object of standardized dimensions that can be loaded from one form of transport to another)

container

containers

that will be reused, recycling will surely be increased. Plastic

product

or non- disposable garbage is very dangerous for

environment

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the environment

sometimes

Suggestion

Sometimes

can not

cannot

be recycled properly and people throw it here and there. So,

government

Suggestion

the government

should

empose

compel to behave in a certain way

impose

law

for using

eco friendly

Suggestion

the Eco friendly product

Eco friendly product

product

Secondly

, recycling should be a

law

for people so that people can learn recycling. For

this

some learning procedure

should be develop

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should develop

should be developed

so that people can learn how to recycle

waste

product

. Television

advertise

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advertises

is advertising

, poster, newspaper column can be effective for

this

Government

should teach people how to recycle household

waste

and plastic

waste

separately by advertisement. By recycling household garbage, we can produce fertilizer. Plastic products turned into different types of handicrafts. So.

government

Suggestion

Government

should show people that process and make a

law

to use it.

Thirdly

government

Suggestion

the government

should make

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opportunity to sell recycled

product

. It is a wide scope for local people selling handicrafts

that is

made from non-useable

product

Waste

product

can be turned into beautiful crafts and show piece by recycling it.

Government

should create a scope for them

for

Suggestion

selle

exchange or deliver for money or its equivalent

sell

sale

these products. For that it should host fair of handicrafts

thus

people can show and sell their new products.

Finally

, I think that

government

should make a legal

law

to recycle

waste

in addition

with

Suggestion

inspiring people to recycle garbage and make an area of benefit for recycling products. So, in a word I can partially think that laws are

need

Suggestion

needed

to make

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

recycle more of their

waste

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