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Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

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Tests and examinations play a vital role in nurturing and grooming of students. School is that place where all students treated equally. In various countries, tests and examinations are one of the important feature of school systems.
This
 essay intends to explore the pros and cons of the same. There are umpteen merits associated with the above statement.
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Suggestion
To
 commence with, tests and exams are beneficial for students to study more
instead
 of playing or going outside with friends. It
also
 helps to test their knowledge and allow teachers to check the level of information that students managed to learn from
leactures
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lectures
 and gives help them in the area where they stuck or did not do well in. Apart from
this
, due to tests or
exams students
Accept comma addition
exams, students
 get motivated to study more in order to get better marks and
also
 to improve their knowledge. At
last
, students will get to know their standard and will be able to work harder on the subject before final exams. Alternatively, to
certain extent
Suggestion
a certain extent
 it has demerits too.
Firstly
, slow learners cannot perform well in the same and
this
 creates inferior complexity among students as it is taken as a peer pressure.
Moreover
, sometimes parents are not happy with their results and compare their
result
Suggestion
results
 with their friends. And
also
 pressurize them to achieve higher marks in upcoming exams which may
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 them psychologically. Alternatively, students will not have enough time to relax. In my opinion, I reckon that the
bemefits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
benefit
 of the same outweigh the disadvantages. I think that it is better for school organization to not to have too many tests and exams throughout the year.
However
, parents should
also
 not to pressurize their children to get good grades and comparing their results with others.
Submitted by Manveet Kaur on

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