Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people's health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

THE CONSUMPTION OF THE FAST FOOD SHOULD BE IN THE DECLINE QUANTITY STATED BY THE MEDICAL TEAM AROUND THE WORLD.
THIS
ESSAY WOULD DISUCSS THE MAJOR REASON WHY PEOPLE PREFERE TO EAT EVEN THOUGH, IT IS HARMFUL FOR THE BODY AND
SECONDLY
, HOW AWARENESS AMONG THE CIVILIANS COULD MINIMIZE THE RISK WITH THE REGIME SUPPORT. ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME CAUSE OF EATING FAST IS THE DELICIOUS TASTE AND EFOORTLESS AVAILABILITY. AS IT PER THE NAME FAST FOOD, IT CAN MADE IN VERY LESS TIME THAT MAKES MORE ACCESIBLE FO THE FOLKS TO OBTAIN WHEN THEY HAVE THE SHORTAGE OF TIME. AND,
ALSO
IT TASTES GOOD SO, FOLKS WILL GO AGAIN AND AGAING TO HAVE IT. AS RESULT INDIVIDUALS CAN CONCENTRATE ON OTHER WORK THAN THE FOOD REQUIREMENT.
FOR INSTANCE
, ACCORDING TO THE GOVERNMENT DATE OF THE UK, 70% OF CIVILIANS RELY ON THE FAST FOOD SHOPS AS THEY FIND THE SHORTAGE OF TIME FOR COOKING THE FOOD.
ON THE OTHER HAND
,
FIRST
AND FORMOST SOLUTION OF
THIS
MENACE IS TO SPREAD THE AWARENESS IN BETWEEN ITIZENS. THE AWARENESS MAKES THEM REALIZE THAT FAST FOOD, EATING PERHAPS RESULT IN THE LOSS OF HEALTHY LIFE.
CONSEQUENTLY
, THE PERSON WOULD ENDED UP WITH EATING TASTLESS FOOD
INSTEAD
OF SLAVOURY ITEAMS.
FOR EXAMPLE
, AS PER THE AUSTRALIAN UNNIVERSITY STUDY, THERE HAS BENN 50% DECLINE IN THE NUMBER OF PEOLE WHO HAS DETRIMENATL HEALTH BECAUSE OF INFORMATION PREOVIDED TO THE COMMON FOLKS BY THE GOVERNMENT. IN CONSLUION, FAST FOO INDEED SATISFY THEIR HUNGER AND TASTE BUDS. HOWEVEVR, THEY ARE FORGETIING ABOUT THE DETRIMENTAL CONSEQUENCES OF THEIR OWN ACTION. BUT, IF INDIVIDUAL AND THE REGIME WORK TOGATHER,
THEN
THIS
MENACES SURELY DIMINISH IN UPCOMING YEARS AROUND THE GLOBE.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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