Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Unlike in the past, a rising number of people postpone having children
to
a later Suggestion
for
at
time
in their life
these days. I think there are more benefits to this
trend than drawbacks.
Firstly
, when parents decide to have children later in their life
, they will be able to spend more time
alone or with anybody they like to spend time
with. This
can make them mentally prepared for the life
ahead as parents. They could also
use this
time
to work on their self-development by gaining more experience in life
and how to raise a child. Secondly
, they have the chance to save more money through allocating sufficient time
to working harder and consequently
preparing for a better life
financially.
On the other hand
, there are disadvantages to delaying having children too. First
of which is the increase in age gap, which results in differences in parents’ and children’s perspectives about Suggestion
The first
life
. This
causes less and less understanding between them, and finally
, a lot of conflicts may occur. Moreover
, men and women might feel unfulfilled as they observe other people becoming parents sooner than them, and it gives them the feeling that they have not had a fruitful life
, and therefore
they will end up divorcing. However
, the first
problem could be solved by parents participating in educational classes to learn about young generations and develop their relationship with their children. In case of the second
problem, it can be argued that by improving other aspects of their life
such
as building up their character and understanding each other, spouses would be able to have a sense of achievement in their marriage.
In conclusion, I think the advantages of having children later in life
outweigh the disadvantages due to the longer time
parents can have for themselves and the better preparation
they will have to become fathers and mothers.Suggestion
prepared
Submitted by Ahmad ELT on
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