Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Unlike in the past, a rising number of people postpone having children
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these days. I think there are more benefits to Use synonyms
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, when parents decide to have children later in their Linking Words
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, they will be able to spend more Use synonyms
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can make them mentally prepared for the Linking Words
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ahead as parents. They could Use synonyms
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to work on their self-development by gaining more experience in Use synonyms
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and how to raise a child. Use synonyms
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, they have the chance to save more money through allocating sufficient Linking Words
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to working harder and Use synonyms
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preparing for a better Linking Words
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financially.
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, there are disadvantages to delaying having children too. Linking Words
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of which is the increase in age gap, which results in differences in parents’ and children’s perspectives about Suggestion
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causes less and less understanding between them, and Linking Words
finally
, a lot of conflicts may occur. Linking Words
Moreover
, men and women might feel unfulfilled as they observe other people becoming parents sooner than them, and it gives them the feeling that they have not had a fruitful Linking Words
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they will end up divorcing. Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
first
problem could be solved by parents participating in educational classes to learn about young generations and develop their relationship with their children. In case of the Linking Words
second
problem, it can be argued that by improving other aspects of their Linking Words
life
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such
as building up their character and understanding each other, spouses would be able to have a sense of achievement in their marriage.
In conclusion, I think the advantages of having children later in Linking Words
life
outweigh the disadvantages due to the longer Use synonyms
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parents can have for themselves and the better Use synonyms
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they will have to become fathers and mothers.Suggestion
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