You live in a room in college which shared with another student.However,there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accomodation officer at thee college In this letter, Describe your situation Explain your problems and why it’s difficult to work Say what kind of accomodation you would prefer

Dear sir or Madam, I have been living in your college

room

for many years.I live with another student. We are facing many problems with our accommodation and the environment we have been living in.

Firstly

, the

room

is closer to the playground, I find many hurdles

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while studying. I cannot concentrate on my studies because of that noisy atmosphere outside.

Secondly

,the furniture of the

room

is in very poor condition. there are many mites, which are sticking to the studying table and chair. These mites are churning the wooden and decomposing it.

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am afraid that it doesn't stick to the books. I request you to please change our

room

near to the library, where we can study calmly.

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provide us

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new furniture. Thank you Yours sincerely