Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why do people do so little about it? Give your suggestion how to solve it?

Indeed, people do not take more action to protect vegetation and animal despite
know
Suggestion
knowing
the fact that they are on the verge of extinction.
However
, the main reason behind
this
is the lack of enough information and to address
this
problem the government should make it compulsory for the media to showcase
such
news. The predominant cause why the people do not know more to save
flora
Suggestion
the flora
and fauna from its extinction is the dearth of appropriate information via media. To elucidate, except politics, sports, scandals, entertainment, no other information related to plants and animals
have been broadcasted
Suggestion
has been broadcast
has been broadcasted
by news channels.
Hence
, people are less likely to know about
such
news.
For example
, billions of
fishes
Suggestion
fish
died in the Persian Gulf Sea during the Iran-Iraq war in 1982 to 1989 due to oil spillage and
this
news was not depicted on any news channel or the internet.
As a result
, the public was less known to save them. The possible solution to tackle
this
problem is for the government. The higher authorities should make it mandatory for media or news channels to highlight
such
news, because they are the ultimate source to let the public know about endangered species and
this
will make
public
Suggestion
the public
more aware to save them from dying out.
For instance
, had
Iran citizen
Accept comma addition
Iran, citizen
known about
such
disaster, more implications would have been applied by the related organisations. In conclusion, due to the lack of enough adequate data, people are not aware of plants and
animals
Suggestion
animal
extinction, so they are not able to protect them.
only
Suggestion
Only
when
higher administration
Suggestion
the higher administration
makes it obligatory to showcase news about
such
endangered species through media, will the problem be solved.
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