You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: Where have you moved to? What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address?
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is John Micheal. I have been an old customer of your bank for the
last
10 years, and my master account number is 0963678828833. I am writing this
letter with regard to change
my Wrong verb form
changing
address
in my bank account profile as I've been moved to a new city last
month.
Due to
the old address
in my account profile, all the important documents are
delivered to my old Wrong verb form
were
address
, so I did not get important communications on time. There was an offer for me to increase my credit card limit to $10k before 20th July of this
month, but I got this
information today, this
opportunity has expired now. There is also
another opportunity for renewal of mortgage at low interest rates, that
Correct pronoun usage
which
also
expired last
week.
Kindly change my address
to the current address
, that is
, 77 Faywood Crescent, Scarborough, ON, L5T 0C2. Please update this
address
at the earliest, and mail future communications to this
address
so I can take the right action at the right time. Also
, I have the request to please send me all the documents which you have sent me from June 21st of last
month to till date, so I can review and take required actions whichever is possible.
I will hope that you will respond to my request at the earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Alicia Liberty.Submitted by kanwalkaur05 on
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suitable writing tone
Ensure that the tone remains consistently formal throughout the letter. While the overall tone is suitable, small adjustments can be made for further refinement.
complete response
Double-check for minor grammatical errors or awkward phrasing to enhance clarity and professionalism.
complete response
The letter clearly addresses all required points: mentioning the new address, the problems faced due to outdated communication, and the request for the update and resending of the documents.
logical structure
The structure of the letter is logical, with each paragraph addressing a particular point. This aids in readability and coherence.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal, fitting the tone of the letter.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph contains a single idea, which is well-explained and elaborated, enhancing overall coherence and cohesion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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