Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies, leads to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, women empowerment is hotly debated in many circles.
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far family matters are concerned, with awareness and education, newly becoming mothers are fully aware of their rights about family planning as opposed to fathers. It is often argued that only
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mother
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a mother
is answerable to raise the kids due while
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father
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the father
is spared from
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duty, but opponents of
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view have v convincing arguments that
father
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should be involved in nurturing the kids along with
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mother
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motherhood
. In my view,
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father
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's involvement is mandatory for a better outcome of kids in
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future
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the future
. On the one hand,
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mother
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the mother
is the ultimate grooming place for kids. She is the one who prepares the kids for
future
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life. She gives guidance and provide confidence to kids to face real life challenges.
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, a recent research at Queen hospital UK
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year revealed a clear link between better academic performance of kids and the level of attention by
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the mother
.
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,
parent
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the parent
is the
first
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nursery for kids and she can manage very well the growth of kids.
On the other hand
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, paternity has the prime importance in a kids growth and character. The majority of the traits in offspring are inherited from
father
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so his involvement in brought up cannot be denied.
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Father
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A father
The father
plays equally important role in raising the young children as
mother
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contributes.
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, in my city there was a parent teacher meeting, with a well renowned educational institutions and teachers emphasized the participation of
father
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in kids academic performance.
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, both parents equally contribute to their offspring in making better member of the society in
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. In conclusion,
mother
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's role has its own
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but, in my opinion, fatherhood has a vital role in kids'
future
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grooming.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Equal Parenting
  • 2. Gender Roles
  • 3. Societal Expectations
  • 4. Emotional Well-being
  • 5. Psychological Development
  • 6. Legal Frameworks
  • 7. Workplace Policies
  • 8. Gender Equality
  • 9. Traditional Responsibilities
  • 10. Active Fatherhood
  • 11. Balanced Development
  • 12. Undue Burden
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