Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others.

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Some people argue that helping others is one of the most essential issues in human life. In my opinion, helping others is a significantly important for a rich person. In

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subject. It is obvious that some people have a superior financial situation than others. I agree with the people who believe that helping others is a positive behaviour

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that it gives them a self-loving feeling when they give some helps to others who are poors.

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, consider someone who cannot afford to buy a computer, if you think you have sufficient money

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, you lend them some financial aid. Certainly, after doing that you will be proud of yourself because of being positively effective on that person's life.

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, helping poor people can be considered as a humanity value, it may bother them

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, if someone helps other with a top-down or a master-slave view, surely it can bother them. From my point of view,

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a helping is one of the most negative and bothering behaviours that a person can perform. In conclusion, helping other people can be considered a high value regarding the humanity and morality, even though it may bother people, if it is done in a wrong manner.

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the intent and quality of helping others are significantly important either, as I think.

Mohammad NMSat Jun 13 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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