Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others.

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Some people argue that helping others is one of the most essential issues in human life. In my opinion, helping others is a significantly important for a rich person. In

this

essay, I will discuss agreements and disagreements about

this

subject. It is obvious that some people have a superior financial situation than others. I agree with the people who believe that helping others is a positive behaviour

such

that it gives them a self-loving feeling when they give some helps to others who are poors.

For instance

, consider someone who cannot afford to buy a computer, if you think you have sufficient money

hence

, you lend them some financial aid. Certainly, after doing that you will be proud of yourself because of being positively effective on that person's life.

However

, helping poor people can be considered as a humanity value, it may bother them

also

For example

, if someone helps other with a top-down or a master-slave view, surely it can bother them. From my point of view,

such

a helping is one of the most negative and bothering behaviours that a person can perform. In conclusion, helping other people can be considered a high value regarding the humanity and morality, even though it may bother people, if it is done in a wrong manner.

Therefore

the intent and quality of helping others are significantly important either, as I think.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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4 paragraphs

231 words

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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others.

Your opinion

In many countries, it is very easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, this causes some people to have problems with debts they cannot pay back. Do you think the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

2)The government should sometimes infringe on people’s freedom for the secutity of society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement