Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others.

#say #opportunity

Some people argue that helping others is one of the most essential issues in human life. In my opinion, helping others is a significantly important for a rich person. In

this

essay, I will discuss agreements and disagreements about

this

subject. It is obvious that some people have a superior financial situation than others. I agree with the people who believe that helping others is a positive behaviour

such

that it gives them a self-loving feeling when they give some helps to others who are poors.

For instance

, consider someone who cannot afford to buy a computer, if you think you have sufficient money

hence

, you lend them some financial aid. Certainly, after doing that you will be proud of yourself because of being positively effective on that person's life.

However

, helping poor people can be considered as a humanity value, it may bother them

also

For example

, if someone helps other with a top-down or a master-slave view, surely it can bother them. From my point of view,

such

a helping is one of the most negative and bothering behaviours that a person can perform. In conclusion, helping other people can be considered a high value regarding the humanity and morality, even though it may bother people, if it is done in a wrong manner.

Therefore

the intent and quality of helping others are significantly important either, as I think.

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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others.

Your opinion

The leaders or directors of organizations are often elderly people. However some say that young people can also take the lead of organisations or companies. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?