Some people feel that education should be provided exclusively by the state and private education should be prohibited. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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belive
that a country should provide a specific accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
belief
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system availble
for all obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
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disagree with the previous refers to the speaker or writer
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a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
statements
,
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refers to the speaker or writer
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belive
people are entitled to choose their suitable accept as true; take to be true
believe
education
where private or public .
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cultures and religion unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
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.
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beliefs
gouvernments
forces all the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
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to a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
attent
public schools with specific be present at (meetings, church services, university), etc.
attend
circulumm
that might not be suitable for an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
every one
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sientific
study rolled up by a of or relating to the practice of science
scientific
prestegious
journal in having an illustrious reputation; respected
prestigious
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revealed that most English navigator remembered for his exploration of the Pacific coast of North America (1757-1798)
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families living in of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Muslim
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Canada
sent
their offsprings to specific Suggestion
send
islamic
schools in rather that public ones in order to teach their children their religion of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Islamic
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from a young ageany customary observance or practice
ritual
.
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result, most
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countries being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
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of a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
education
system
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their children, because they register formally as a participant or member
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recive
extra subjects get something; come into possession of
receive
such
as a forgein
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language
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carrier
prospects.the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
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institutions
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a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
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prosperity
prospect
.
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systems needed for future distingish
mark as different
distinguish
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