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some people are of the opinion that the key to success and business is to possess a unique product to sell. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some people think that the secret to
business
 success
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
 is simply to manufacture something unique. It is a fact that new and unique things have always been the focus of buyers
,
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,
 but that does not think
business
 success depends on just one thing there are other things to consider if you want to grow your
business
. In
this
 essay I will point out some aspects justify my opinion.
selling
Suggestion
Selling
 something unique does not eliminate the responsibility of any
business
 individual,
on the contrary
 it increases many times over. Maintaining the quality after manufacturing something unique is mammoth challenge. After successfully manufacturing and bringing a unique item to market, you are not able to resolve complaints from customers and even
also
 fail to maintain its quality, your
business
 will gradually start to lose. In order to make any
business
 successful the ability of the employees and the work they do is very considerable. Employees only receive salaries so it is a common observation that did not work diligently.
therefore
 it is important to ensure that employees and mentally and physically prosper to ensure their involvement is filled In
business
 activities if the needs of employees are not being considered they will surely considered changing jobs
this
 will reduce the number of employees involved in the production of unique products and the company will be disturbed lysed
as a result
 hiring new employees and training them will wasted lot of time and money. To summarise the findings
,
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,
I would say that key to making a successful
business
 is not only the manufacture unique product but many other factors should be considered.
Such
 as accurate pricing
,
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,
no compromise on quality and taking care of employees.
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