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Does personality describe the person? To what extent do you agree?

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Whether one’s
personality
 is the most important and the key defining factor of a person or not is an unanswered question which has gained much attention. I personally agree with the fact that
personality
 is implicated in how a person is described and perceived. The
first
 area in which
personality
 plays a crucial role in people’s
interpretation
 of the world around them.
This
interpretation
 is made based on our
personality
 in that the
personality
 act as a lens through which people see the world and communicate with it. Naturally, those who enjoy a deep, complex, and multi-faceted
personality
are
Suggestion
is
 more likely to have an accurate
interpretation
, and those who lack
such
personality
 are likely to fail to interpret the world correctly,
thus
 likely to fail.
Therefore
, by the means of
this
interpretation
, which is energized by
personality
, people perceive their fellows, and their fellows reciprocally perceive them in different ways; maybe positively or negatively. If it is
positively
Suggestion
positive
, people have more chance to make achievement and vice versa.
Moreover
, people are always being evaluated during their lives in several situations ranging from university placements to job interviews, most of which based on
personality
 traits. As
being
Suggestion
has been
 successful in these interviews can sometimes guarantee people’s achievement and prospect, and as it is one’s achievement that defines who are they, it can be said that how important the
personality
 is.
Hence
, there is a reciprocal relationship between
personality
 and the way in which we are defined or described by the society. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that our
personality
 describes who a person is on the basis of its importance in the way we are viewed by others and how we are evaluated by the society.
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