You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend would like to find some quality websites where he/she can read up on what’s happening in the world. He/she has written to you asking for some advice. Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter • include websites you recommend • say why you recommend them • give some other ideas which you think may be useful

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Dear Mary, I was glad to hear back from you. It’s nice to hear that you and your family have been safe and maintaining social distancing during the pandemic. During

this

pandemic, I recommend these two websites to update you about the things that are happening in the world. My recommendation for the website mainly depends on international or domestic

news

. If you are looking for something specific about our country, Nepal,

then

I would suggest ekantipur.com.

However

, if you are looking for trending international

news

, I recommend either bbc.co.uk or cnn.com. The reason I am recommending these websites is because of

its

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trusting relationship with

its

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readers. While Kantipur provides detailed local

news

, BBC and CNN relay impartial political views and social views. Other than these websites, I would

also

suggest you go through social media.

Although

it does not provide overall

news

, it sends away personal messages

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people involved in the trending topic.

Also

, watching documentaries gives background information on the issue. I hope these sources will provide more information as you were seeking. Stay safe. Take care.

Upa

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

182 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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