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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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One of the most significant features of human is helping others in tough situations. Some may argue that wealthy people have a great chance to help others which is the most important feature of them. I strongly agree with
this
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 statement for many reasons, the primary of which
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is
 the ability to run a charity to help the needy and start a
business
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 to benefit members of the company. To start with, those who have enough
money
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 are able to help the needy by running a charity.
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 places recognize real poor people who struggle for life and help them
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in
 many aspects of life, ranging from education to food, leading to
better life-style
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a better lifestyle
better lifestyle
better lifestyles
 for others.
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 to helping the poor, wealthy people have the opportunity to start a new
business
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 and recruit others who need a way to make
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. Many employees in these companies receive salary and social security, so that they can make successful family and bring up better offspring. In fact, not only would the rich be able to help the needy, but
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 they can benefit the whole society by spending their
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 on
business
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, both of which are vitally important for the society.
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, some may argue that anyone could help others, regardless how much
money
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 they have. There are some occasions that one could lend a hand to others and solve their problems without
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. Giving some education courses,
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, could be a great help to the needy, which does not cost any penny.
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, the number of
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 occasions is not significant and only by
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, could many people’s problems be tackled. By way of conclusion, having enough
money
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 would be a great tool to help others by stablishing a charity or starting a new
business
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 which are beneficial for the majority part of the society, and in some rare circumstances ones could help others without
money
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 which is not significant in comparison with, so I once again reaffirm my position that the most important feature of having enough
money
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 is the ability to help others.
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