Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people think governments should construct more railways than roads even if it costs more than building new highway roads.
Although
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railway
has some advantages, I would disagree with Use synonyms
this
statement.
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of all, I would like to write about my opinions on travelling by train. For passengers, it is comfortable to travel and costs less to buy tickets. But, for the government it costs too much to construct and take time to finish Linking Words
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type of project, especially building in a vast and rocky place like Mongolia which is my birth country. In Mongolia, cities are long-distance from each other, and the population is only three million. So, the Linking Words
railway
projects will take time to regain the construction budget. Use synonyms
Also
, following train timetables to travel is not flexible for customers who have urgent needs.
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On the other hand
, driving our own car on the highway is suited to Mongolia's condition. Linking Words
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, it wastes less money than the Linking Words
railway
and possible to build in summer time, only for 3 months. Use synonyms
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, two years ago, Mongolian government had built a road to Khuvsgul lake, which is one of the famous travel spots of Mongolia, so many people went there with their family by their own car. Linking Words
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, driving our own car gives us freedom to stop whenever we need or go wherever we want. Linking Words
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is the main reason to choose to drive on roads.
In conclusion, the government's one of the main duties and responsibilities is to create infrastructure to provide people’s needs. To create that public sector should do research and spend less money as possible. So building roads will continue unless people possess cars. The Linking Words
railway
is used for some busy directions. Unfortunately, some people should agree that not all places busy like big cities.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite