You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities

Dear Stephanie, I hope

this

Linking Words

letter finds you in good health. I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter to tell you that I have a couple of off days, so I

decided

Verb problem

have decided

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to travel to visit you. I don't want to bother you, so I have booked a youth hostel near your flat. I hope that we could spend time together in the evening. I hope that you won't have to overwork during the time I am going to be in the city. You may

think

Verb problem

wonder

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why I am free at

this

Linking Words

time of the year. Actually, my colleagues and I have worked on a big project for two months. As I was the project manager, I

have undergone

Wrong verb form

underwent

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severe pressure.

Thus

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, my manager recommended I take a vacation so that I can put my mind at ease.

Lastly

Linking Words

, I want to tell you about my vacation plan. We can rent a beach house

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apply

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and spend the vacation lazing around.

Also

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, we can hold a party on Friday night

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apply

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and invite our mutual friends. If you agree with the plan, please let me know. See you soon, Amir

amirghas92

May 27, 2023

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task response

Your letter shows you have time off and you want to see your friend. You say why you are free and you give ideas for what to do.

coherence

Try to keep each paragraph about one main idea. Use simple link words to move from one idea to the next.

greeting closing

Your greeting and closing are kind. The tone fits well for a friend.

content

Friendly tone and clear plan to visit.

structure

Opening and closing are present.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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